Friday, August 29, 2014

WAR KIDS (A Syrian Story) #Excerpt by H J Lawson @hjlawson1 #AmReading #YA

Chapter 1 - JADA

“Wake up. Run.”

Jada wake up! I scream in my head.

Bracing myself, I take a deep breath and millions of tiny molecules fly up my nostrils and down my throat. What is this familiar taste? It reminds me of when I was young and played with chalk.

Where am I?

A cold shiver runs over my body as questions flood my mind. What happened? Why do I feel like I’m covered in dust? Father never trained me for this… are they going to kidnap me the same way they did him?

I’m terrified to see what awaits me. But I force myself to open my eyes. In a flash, like a lightning bolt, I see the unthinkable horror in front of me.

A blurred image of a young boy stands trembling at the end of my hospital bed, his bewildered face covered in dust and tears. I can see his dazzling white teeth as he screams... Why can’t I hear him? Oh my God, what has happened to the poor child? Where is his mother?

Where is mine? Why can’t I hear anything… is this real or a crazy nightmare?

I frantically look around for my mother, but I don’t see her anywhere.

Mother where are you?

With a sheet of gray dust over my face, it reminds me of when my mother and I would play dress up and she would add blush to my cheeks. I wish I could go back to those happier times, before the war, to when I could just be a child.

But those times have gone.

The gray walls of the hospital are like a snowy day in the city, yet they crumble in front of my eyes. A blaring light fights against the protective cover of the few blind slats on the window that survived the attack. Where is the light coming from? It’s the middle of the night! Is my mind playing tricks on me?

The smell of death is all around me.

As I shift uneasily on the bed, the plastic material squeaks against my sticky, sweaty skin. No! I have to stay quiet and not draw attention to myself.

I look at the bed next to me. The overhead light has fallen down, and sparks are flying from the ceiling. I see the same dusty gray layer, but it is turning blood-red. An elderly man is slumped over.

As the light continues to flash, I see him more clearly.

He has large, overgrown eyebrows on his small wrinkled face, and there is blood seeping through his clothes. He is dying right in front of me.

We stare at each other, frozen in shock. Not daring to speak, his dark eyes hold my gaze. His thin, straight lips start to slowly part. Fear floods through me. I shake my head and plead at him with my eyes.

Please don’t make a sound!

The old man’s eyebrows rise up, and he silently mouths, “Run.” The hairs on the back my neck prickles to the rhythm of my terrified heart, but I remain still, too afraid to move.

Someone help me, anyone! I cannot do this!

I have to move… get out of here before they get me. I slowly shift myself to the edge of the bed.  My legs are numb, and my toes are tingling. My body is weak, but I have to stay strong.

As I look down on the floor beside me, where my feet are about to land, I see a dust-covered body. It is the caring lady doctor, the one who was looking after me. Faith. I can see glimpses of her golden strands of hair through the soot.

Not Faith!

I remember her soft voice as I faded in and out of consciousness, and the blurred image of her peering over me like a beautiful angel, telling me everything would be okay and that she would protect me. Tears pour down my face as I gaze at her now lifeless body.

Suddenly the silence is broken by the sounds of screaming. I cover my ears to block the unbearable noise. Screaming everywhere, all around me.

This is not a dream; this is a true- life nightmare.

Light beams hit my face, and a door open. As my eyes adjust, I begin see the shadows in the doorway.

I can't stay. I have no choice.

Soldiers are standing in the doorway, a sea of blue helmets with sage and brown camouflage, with black jackets projecting their heartless bodies, their faces covered by gas masks. Their belts bulge with water bottles. I'm so thirsty for just one tiny drop…get the taste of chalk out of my mouth.

Big black boots stand amongst the debris, sturdy, confident. Each soldier holds one hand over the long barrel of a gun, the other over the trigger. Poised, ready.  My heart skips another beat.

There are too many of them. Even if I had my gun, I wouldn’t be able to kill them all. But maybe enough to make a run for it…

My father was teaching me how to use a gun before he was kidnapped over a year ago, when I was thirteen. All I wanted to do was stay in bed and cry, but Mother dragged me out and forced me to continue. I lashed out at her and begged her to leave me to grieve for my father, but she insisted.
I’m a perfect shot now.

“Run, child, run!” the dying man screams to me.

I leap off the bed and land on Faith.

“Ouch!” she grunts.

Oh my God… She’s alive!

As I crouch down beside her, the sounds of footsteps get closer.

“Faith, I'm so sorry… are you okay? What's happening?” I gasp.

“Run!” she yells. “RUN!”

I jump up and grab the bewildered young boy in front of me. The soldiers are coming; they are bloody coming!

“Come on, we have to get out of her,” I say to him.

A soldier reaches out and grabs the child’s arm.

“Ouch!” he cries.

“Get off him!” It feels like a golf ball is in my mouth. I stutter as I squeal, and the boy’s eyes look like they’re going to explode.

“Leave him alone; you are hurting him!”

But the solider is too strong and continues to pull. With one fast swoop, the boy is out of my hand and the solider picks him up in his arms.

The child screams and thrashes his arms and legs in a violent rage.

“Leave him alone!”  I shout again.

“Kid, we’re here to help! I mean you no harm,” the solider informs me as he marches away.

Here to help?! Does he think I’m crazy?

The room begins to spin, my mind cannot handle this. Oh God, they’re moving forward, they soldiers are coming from me now!

I turn away from them and start to run without looking back.  I have no choice. There is nothing else I can do.

I have to keep moving… it’s the only way to get out of here alive. Bodies are strewn everywhere, some small and wrapped in blankets. All covered with the gray dust.

What the hell is going on?!

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Hayley Lawson is the author of War Kids. She has written a young adult contemporary novel set in Syria; a story about the Syrian Civil war though the eyes of children.

She was born in Lancaster, England. Growing up in a single parent household with five other siblings; was hard, and also character building.

As a young child she found a passion for drawing, and continued this into adulthood, graduating from the University of Central Lancashire, England with a BA(Hons) in fashion design.

At aged twenty seven, Hayley and her husband packed up their belongings for a lifelong dream to move to California. Her America dream was complete with the birth of her daughter. Her love for traveling, continued after the birth of her daughter traveling around America with the family, and the best travelled dog.
A new job positioned opened up New York, and the family decide to relocate to Long Island, NY, which is where she currently resides.

On August 21 she was moved by the images of the Syrian conflict, and embarked on an unlikely journey of writing her first novel.


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All profits from the book will be going to the save the children charity.

When fourteen-year-old Jada wakes up in a hospital, the last thing she thinks is that her life has completely changed forever. But when the very real civil war forces her to flee from every open space, she must use the firearm skills her father taught her to reunite with him and protect herself. Armed with a single gun and a key to an unknown locker, Jada crosses Syria on a journey with a group of children called the Fearless Freedom Fighters. With the leader, Zak, they mount a plan to rescue their fathers while they try to cope with the merciless murders of their families. As Jada and Zak lead the group together, love blossoms, but with soldiers hot on their tail, they need to stay vigilant in the face of war.

Reviews from wattpad
Very interesting story, very powerful. I can really feel the emotion...Peter

This book really touches my heart because there is so much truth is in this book. The detail is so brilliantly displayed, its beautifuly written. There are pretty intense chapters, its good... scrap that its excellent. Loe the work ...although I am upset. I know this is a fictional story, but I just can't help but feel extremely bad for all the lost lives especially the innocent and young ones...Saddy

A REMARKABLE BOOK, DEMANDS TO BE READ Goodreads review from Joe Eliseon

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Genre - Young Adult 
Rating – PG-13
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Tuesday, August 26, 2014

@MichelleArgyle on What Inspired "If I Forget You" #AmWriting #NALit #Romance

What Inspired Me to Write My Book, IF I FORGET YOU

Anyone who knows me will tell you that I am forgetful. I’ve even lost friends over it. I used to think this was a bad thing, but then I realized it’s just a part of life. People come and go in our lives, and I think it’s important to realize we are all going to hurt each other at some point, but we can also help and love each other along the way too.

ONE OF MY GREATEST FAULTS
IF I FORGET YOU came out of an experience I used to bury deep inside of me. In fact, it’s an experience I’m still not quite over, even after writing a whole novel inspired by it. It wasn’t the single experience, but a culmination of several similar experiences, ending in that one, that really sparked the idea. My publisher at the time told me I should write a story based on one of my greatest faults, and I immediately thought of my forgetfulness because of these recent experiences. They all happened to be me blaming myself for losing friends because of things I’d forgotten to do. In some cases, the friends blamed me outright, but in others I kind of heaped on the blame all by myself.

BLAMING MYSELF
My main character in the novel, Avery, likes to blame herself too. She blames herself for stealing away her best friend’s boyfriend. She blames herself for being a loner. She blames herself for her forgetfulness. The key is that many of those things are her fault, to an extent. The one thing I’ve discovered in my own experiences is that there is no black and white, but most of all, that blame doesn’t get you very far, especially when it’s blame on yourself.

THERAPEUTIC
I’m not as forgetful as Avery, but I do keep constant lists like she does. I’ve mixed up several people before, mistaking several people for one person, etc. It can happen, and it’s comical and sad at the same time. Because of all this, I thought it might be therapeutic to sit down and write a story based on these things I’ve always thought of as my biggest faults: my blaming myself, my forgetfulness, my anger with other people for not accepting my faults. Writing the book really was therapeutic, too, but it didn’t solve everything for me. I don’t think anything but time and constant self-evaluation can do that.

PUBLISHED
Now that my novel is finally out there for the world to see, I’ve been a little reluctant to actually market the dang thing. But I know even if only a few people read the book, I’ll have done something good with my own experiences and creativity. That accounts for a lot, especially when I might one day forget the experiences that inspired the entire endeavor to begin with …


“Beautiful prose, interesting characters, and sizzling romance make this book simply unforgettable. I adored it.” – Kasie West, author of The Distance Between Us
“Avery may have a bad memory, but I will never forget this book.” – Natalie Whipple, author of House of Ivy & Sorrow
“Achingly sweet and beautiful, If I Forget You stole my romantic reader heart.” – Cassie Mae, bestselling author of Switched
Avery Hollister is a little more than absentminded. She has trouble remembering faces, names, and dates without her piles of lists and Post-it notes. When she heads off to college it takes her a week to realize the guy she’s crushing on is, in fact, three different guys. With a faulty memory and three men who have no idea she’s mixed them up, Avery doesn’t know how to fix the mess she’s made. But she knows she has to try, even if it means losing a love not even she could forget.
**If I Forget You is considered clean New Adult/Young Adult fiction appropriate for adults and young adults. It contains adult themes and issues.**
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Genre – Contemporary New Adult Romance
Rating – PG-13
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#ReviewShare The Bully Barn: A Lesson For #Bullies, Bystanders and Victims by Robert Gioia

The Bully Barn: A Lesson For Bullies, Bystanders and VictimsThe Bully Barn: A Lesson For Bullies, Bystanders and Victims by Robert Gioia
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

A great book that can also open up discussions about bullying between parent and child. Bullying may be a fact of life but I am confident that if a child is taught early on the definitions of bullying and what not to do, the chances of dealing with bullying are better. The pictures and simple sentences are able to keep a child engaged.

Treating others how you want to be treated is a lesson that many do not practice anymore. Most people let alone children treat people one way and expect to be treated another. The Bully Barn highlights this using Marty the Mouse and it is a powerful lesson for child and parent.

Disclosure - As a Quality Reads UK Book Club member, I received a free copy of this book in exchange for my honest review. I received no monetary compensation for my book review. This book review is based on my thoughts, opinion and understanding of the book. This book review does not reflect the opinion of other book club members.

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Monday, August 25, 2014

#ReviewShare #NaLit #Paranormal Haunted by Eileen Maksym @eileenmaksym

HauntedHaunted by Eileen Maksym
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Tara Martin is one of the most logical characters around. Each of her actions although questionable had her own reasoning which did make sense. One of the best things about this book is the secondary characters who did distract you from the plot or from Tara.

Both Steven and Paul talked about her and to her but they each played their own role in the plot which was good. The ghosts were a nice element and did their part to creep me out.

The story was easy to read and once you are used to Maksym’s writing, you’ll be running through the pages. There was enough mystery, paranormal and romance in perfect balance. The story was not cluttered with unnecessary descriptions or dialogue.

All in all, I liked the book. If you like supernatural mysteries, I recommend this book.

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#ReviewShare #UrbanFantasy #Paranormal Cast in Blood by Michelle Rabe @MichRabe

Cast in BloodCast in Blood by Michelle Rabe
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

I found myself completely lost in this book from start to finish. The flow of the story was excellent and you did not feel forced to join the characters in the story. Morgan sometimes came across as a know it all who didn’t anyone to help her but this worked for her character. It didn’t make her arrogant. It made her unique and independent.

Morgan Blackstone definitely has a lot of potential to become a long-term series or even a tv series. The drama was engaging and not over dramatic to the point of losing the reader. There was a recent vampire read we had at the book club where each chapter ended with a question mark which was the author’s intention to hook readers into the next book in the series. Uhhh, no. And thank goodness this book was nothing like that.

Everything that needed to be answered was answered in this book and I look forward to reading more writing from this author. I wish her all the best with her writing and this book was definitely a fantastic start.

Disclosure - As a Quality Reads UK Book Club member, I received a free copy of this book in exchange for my honest review. I received no monetary compensation for my book review. This book review is based on my thoughts, opinion and understanding of the book. This book review does not reflect the opinion of other book club members.

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